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story sketch: the henchmen's hitch [update: 09-14-2011]

This is a scene from The Henchmen's Hitch, a poem by [personal profile] ysabetwordsmith about what happens when a pair of not-so-evil henchmen named Nib and Brod try to bring their master a magical sword.





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Oh, very nice! I love how you brought the people out into the foreground, in terms of what I noticed first. I also like the additions in the metalwork of the gate doors.

If you do another iteration, you should add stone texture to the blocks in the stone towers. You could also add either foliage or some rocks as texture around the path up the mountain.

Yes...

I agree, if later revision appears. Horses and their harness would benefit from more detail, along with stonework and path. Maybe the basalt tower too, but I'd leave that for last since it's the farthest away.