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story sketch: the henchmen's hitch [update: 09-14-2011]

This is a scene from The Henchmen's Hitch, a poem by [personal profile] ysabetwordsmith about what happens when a pair of not-so-evil henchmen named Nib and Brod try to bring their master a magical sword.





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I like the recent update. The gate definitely looks more Mordor-esque and having the palace fill that upper left corner gives us the impression that it is immense compared to the first sketch. Adjusting the scale by increasing the size of the horses seems to work well, too.
Actually, it looks like you also made Nib smaller, too, which works.
I made Brod and the horses bigger, and made Nib a bit smaller and moved him forward slightly. Glad you like it :)
It works. :)